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Chains of No Control
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Reflection The day and night are the same for me
Time has disappeared in the background
Its life which is running at the speed of light
And I am unable to escape from the whirlpool which is drawing me in
There is no way to liberate myself from the chains of no control
Oh! Its life running at the speed of light
And I am still caught in the whirlpool
Going round and round
The swirl is bottomless
It has no end
My hands are bound by my thoughts and perceptions
My illusions and my experiences
The reality and fiction
Oh! Life is running away at the speed of light
And my struggle is not over
The end is far or is it near?
I am encompassed by the fear of not having lived
Stop! Stop the clock
The hands have to stop
The motion has to stop
Freedom is what I seek
Freedom is what I wish for
The satisfaction to live a life
Which is beyond the chains of No Control.
nice poem, will be more effective i think if you make it "No Control" instead of "no control" in the last line. the meaning becomes different in the two cases, even a hyphen can be used between the two words.
It is not too abstract, and i think you can add it to "reflections"?