"PAINED!"

Diffuse pain~

through my veins~

through my arteries~

i just feel PAIN!



heart tingling~

my breath was taken~

i love him,

i LOVE HIM,

NO..... I HATE HIM!



Pain~

in the heart~

Localizing!



Pain~

Breaking my inside~

It's badly hurting!



Pain~

From the start~

was daily rising!

but i didnt notice~

i was stupidly BLIND~

my heart was screeming!



Blazing lies~

His magical eyes~

blinded with love!

i thought :" Its pain~

is somehow amazing!~

it wouldnt hurt!"

but i was stupidly BLIND~

its hurt left a cut,

deep inside~ i've been CUT!



heart tingling~

my breath was taken~

i love him,

i LOVE HIM,

NO..... I HATE HIM!



severly PAINED~

i cant forget~

i've learned to hate~

and for falling to him~

i'll daily regret it!



I dont love him,

NO I DON'T!

cause i simply~

HATE HIM!



The end!

5:30 am!

25/5/2005

Author's Notes/Comments: 

yes yes yes, and yesssssssss i finally had a reason to HATE him !:)..i hate him, i hate him, i HATE HIM!

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Ryan McDowell's picture

wow, awesome poem, i can almost feel the pain. Very good.

Ryan McDowell's picture

wow, awesome poem, i can almost feel the pain. Very good.

Melissa Calvert's picture

Wow..seems things have been tough with a guy. Guys suck.
Awesome work.