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Love/Obsession "Bittersweet" 1 - 6 - 03
p.s.- i wrote this high thinknin about relationships, no one in particular, fyi. tell me whatcha think about the commenting/author interpretation of each stanza -- keep in mind, this is my interpretation/meaning and you are still entitled to your own interpretation/relation to yourself. enjoy and thanks for your time :)
as i'm walkin on the beach
i see a starfield sky
to the stars i wish to reach
to be lost again in your eye
toss myself among the jewels
drift upon your ocean of lies
it is comfort even with the cruels
of these currents and the tides
--the first stanza expresses the loneliness of the one with the many, how he focuses on the one, while ignoring the rest of his life--
lost, lost, lost all alone
left with no guide or hope
seems this night would never end
left always below your sight
thought i could never move on
always stuck under your eyes
but it's when i'm down and gone
that i see right through your guise
--2nd stanza relates how he feels when he sees the true side of his partner, that she is 'feeding' off him and holding him back (this is his own paranoia, too, keep this in mind)
you're an evil, yes you are
never let me drift that far
but now that i know who you are
i won't let you take my star
--same as second but now he's fighting back--
as i move break free of you
it is now that you show true
i know i wil never forget you
but leave you behind is what i'll do
--him moving on with his life--
break out scream and moan
i'm out on my way home
it is this beach that i roam
the place where i'm all alone
--he follows through with the break-up and experiences the pain and depression of his new found freedom--
now you are left upon the beach
all your dreams are out of reach
as your life flows through the breach
where i once held, the leech....
--this finally shows how she felt about the break-up - she cared just as much as him yet didn't know how to express it - she feels the bite of reality and enters her own depression--
