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Depression "11" 9 - 22 - 01
11 months
so very short
11 days
not long enough
11 hours
I hope to die
11 minutes
this poem will take
11 seconds
my life will drain
11 moments
the memory did last
11 lives
are in my past
11 friends
all I have now
11 skeletons
in my closet
11 hours
my eyes did cry
11 ways
I want to die....
Very short, very powerful...
Loved it. Wouldn't expect anything less of you ;)
Keep it up!
hey sup i really liked this one its awsome
i can relate
you are going to make me cry man
i've read your poems and they do show promise, however, after reading them all, you seem like a one trick pony. what else is there to you? is this what defines you as a human? if anything, delve into WHY you are in the state you are? we must move past "misery loves company," because it is a self-perpetuating complex, you have to break the link somewhere, the cycle must be broken as they say. why not with you. you obviously have a talent with expression, use it! if all you want to do is die, then quit dicking around with words!
So short, yet so meaningful. Truly a masterful piece, keep it up. It's too bad you've already used this criteria or I'd use it myself. Once again, quite impressive. Locke
11 friends all I have now.... it's always beenmy opinion it's not the quanity of friends yu have its the quality of the friends you have....if you have one true friend....you are blessed. Keep writing....I like your work =)