Dismantle

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Inches or miles between breaths

it doesn't matter

I hit the mark

 

I could tell you my terrible thoughts

 

But this sweet darkness is like a lover,

pouring over me in shadows
It merely wets my tongue

 

and I need to be quenched.

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Davin's picture

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I'm enjoying your writing because of the confidence !   Jealous.

a.griffiths57's picture

    Thank goodness all our

 

 

Thank goodness all our thoughts are hidden, from each other; I suppose as long as we don't hide from our own thoughts good or bad.  Liked your poem a good read. 


 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

running_with_rabbits's picture

I am never left wanting when

I am never left wanting when I visit your page :)


Much Love

Ashley

SSmoothie's picture

Nice one! some smooth moves

Nice one! some smooth moves with a bit of bite! hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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allets's picture

Thirst

quenched - Lady A

 


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