Inches or miles between breaths

it doesn't matter

I hit the mark


I could tell you my terrible thoughts


But this sweet darkness is like a lover,

pouring over me in shadows
It merely wets my tongue


and I need to be quenched.

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Davin's picture


I'm enjoying your writing because of the confidence !   Jealous.

a.griffiths57's picture

    Thank goodness all our



Thank goodness all our thoughts are hidden, from each other; I suppose as long as we don't hide from our own thoughts good or bad.  Liked your poem a good read. 




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I am never left wanting when

I am never left wanting when I visit your page :)

Much Love


SSmoothie's picture

Nice one! some smooth moves

Nice one! some smooth moves with a bit of bite! hugss

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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quenched - Lady A