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WHEN YOUR WORLD FALLS APART

What do you do, when your world falls apart?

What do you do? when somebody breaks your heart,

And you wish for all the gray clouds to part

And bring in sunshine, in your own world to chart.



What do you do, when your world falls apart?

And in life nothing for you, seems to go right,

But still in the dark of your soul, with all your might you fight

For all that you hold dear, and all you believe deep in your heart.



What do you do, when your world falls apart?

And there you sit all alone, and you cry to God in the dark

And your heart is just bleeding, from too many darts,

That have wounded you and make you all,just fall apart.



And what do you do, when your world falls apart?

I would say to you, just get up and make a new restart,

And get in touch with your God, and this time heart to heart

And also in God's name, pray and leave behind all that's Dark!


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last updated 11 October 2010 - 8:36pm
©15 September 2002 - 9:35pm — ladydp2000
13 July 2009 - 9:29am — Nickson Magak (not verified)
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The past, even though dark as you portray isn’t always gloomy. The past tribulations, temptations and tests are lives vital lessons. These are experiences that shape our future. When someone breaks your heart, it means he wasn’t for you or you have to learn through setbacks, life is never a straight graph. Love is real life, one has to meet the challenges.

It is so encouraging you advice that one should never give up. What a great society we would have if people never lose hope. Sometimes sitting alone is time for self recreation, discovery and meditation. it results into a new refurbished and energized person.

Most importantly, God is the master planner, whoever believes and trusts in him should not worry. God’s plans are never in vain. It is so inspiring that you believe in god. That is the beginning of wisdom and happiness.

The flow is great and the rhetoric question leaves room for self realization and debate. The rhyming compounded with symbolism lends an inspiring tone. This is a hopeful piece that sounds optimistic bells. Life is not all gloom even in stress. This is the role of writers.

It is a great piece Dorian.

By Nickson Magak