DAISY HAIKU.

White petals waving

As Shasta daisies dance to

The song in my heart.

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I Can't Let Go's picture

oh beautiful! white daisies are one of my favourite flowers...so I love this...and it is written well too :)

saiom's picture

whether or not this poem was motivated by an ecstatic
experience... it creates joy in the reader

thank you!



 

 

Karyn Indursky's picture

I enjoyed reading this poem and the picture it gave me with those delightful emotions. It's amazing to me how some people are able to say so much in a short amount of words like you did here. My hat's off to you my friend, especially because this is one kind of poem I'm not good at.

Michelle Hudson's picture

This paints a vivid picture of happiness! Wonderful write!
Michelle Hudson

saiom's picture

This poem is as perfect as a crystalline
raindrop which reflects
the creamy moon foiled by purple velvet sky



 

 

kat's picture

Nice lil daisy haiku.
I just happen to love daisies...have a few poems about them also.

Kim

saiom's picture

.. you might be the lady conductor that John C
Lehman wrote of when he wrote

"Lady Conductor lifts her baton... and Beethoven answers"



 

 

Kathy Nguyen's picture

Cute! I love flowers! Daisies--mmm... Whenever I think of them, I think of them being ditzy! hehe. Ditzy Daisies Dancing to your heart! LOL. I love the choice of words you got there! :P

poetvg's picture

neat poem .