I wrote it for her

Folder: 
Right Now

 

 

 

 

I Wrote It For Her

But She Don't Care

 

There Must Be

Another

Like The Other

Out There

 

KS

 

Dont get me into

A long conversation

About who like who

 

.

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Sassylass's picture

But

I care!

im waiting!


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

Morningglory's picture

...

I care too, KS! Please come back. Miss your cryptic!!


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djtj's picture

Dont get me intoA long

Opps it posted twice.   So I changed it Wheres the delete button?Some good commentators here.

KindredSpirit's picture

It's OK

That missing delete happens at times.

I just wrote a poem named  " the delete "

When that happened to me but then

I unpublished it.

 

The comments can add a lot.

KS

djtj's picture

You funny

You funny

KindredSpirit's picture

Sometimes

I have a poem i wrote before

That deals with this.

Unpublished .

KS

Some other day

Maybe

djtj's picture

Dont get me into A long

Dont get me into

A long conversation

About who like who

 

Really they can be long and fruitless

And the comment from one that they tossed out those poems written for those gone.  Hell no.  As you say there is another like the other, but will get it. Not that you scratch off the name at the top like a scene in Shakespeare, but we refer to the feeling and make it better.

Fun stuff

Debbie

KindredSpirit's picture

The comments

Made this what it is .

 

The Poem was not personalized

But the comments  R .

 

KS

Some people dont appreciate .

KindredSpirit's picture

Together ( WML )

Sometimes you have to

Give her a chance

To find you

KS

 

As you find yourself

 

Each other

Rides off

 

Into the sunset

 

Together

lizardking's picture

i love you

been there too. i wrote about 30 songs for her. took em all down when i realized i'd have done the same she did if i were her. hell, who's worse, me for thinking i deserved her, or her for rejecting a guy who thinks he deserves what he wants? tihngs like that lead me to the brink of destruction.

 

not that this applies to you, just how i relate to your writing. :)

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You are a good writer

And one of the good guys.

You will find someone for you.

 

LizardKing

Seems self destuctive

KS

But alot of Us are

At times