You Are Right

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You are Right

 

 

I Love you

Through all the fears

I Love you

When empty

Love appears

 

But we fear

All the fears

 

Even when we say

We don't fear

 

And Love runs away

From the fear

Of the fear

That someone

Will pick it up

And make it worse

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SSmoothie's picture

How true! Nice format too! 

How true! Nice format too! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

KindredSpirit's picture

Thanx Smoothie

I almost want to break that

Last line away in the first stanza.

But people can read it how

They want to.

Kinda like Love.

KS

SSmoothie's picture

No it reads perfect break it

No it reads perfect break it away and it will change the flow . Great job! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."