last summer

thoughts are spinning
with no end
no beginning
you dont know how u effect me
say you luv me
say everything from
A to Z
i drink it up like afternoon tea
im struggling
you said i could trust you
but something inside wont let me
seems like everyone else
knows whats best for me
so can you explain
to me
why his actions has such a greater effect on me
together we are like thunder beautifully
we light up the night sky
destructive at times
we capture curious eyes
scare the innocents beneath their covers
god,.. the way you touch me
think deeply
mentally
physically
emotionally
wishing you had
no effect on me

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a.griffiths57's picture

    Great and strong imagery

 

 

Great and strong imagery in this love poem. I enjoyed reading it.


 

 

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