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Take A Breath
It's what you are
Afraid to start
Cover up the scars
That you cannot hide
Take a breath, I'll be your guide
Follow me back to the light
Face this fear
Nothing's clear
Just stay here
Why are you searching for answers
Let it go
Dangerous
Venomous
Your fear is spreading the cancer
It's what we are
Broken hearts
Let me see the scars
That you keep inside
Take a breath, your tears will dry
Walls once between us fade from sight
Lost inside
Afraid to try
Do not hide
You're such a lovely lonely sight
Dry your tears
I'll be here
Just stay near
I'm by your side and I'm sincere
I see your heart
Every Part
Leave behind the scars
Filled with hope inside
Take a breath, let's turn the tide
I know we can make it all right
Take a breath:
I hope you and your dismayed to be lover make it. I liked your poem particularly the last verse, it sums up the whole poem so explanatively. A good read and well written.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
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Josh Myler