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Rain

Rain

Rain down on my window pane

Forget about all of the blame

Just Rain

Rain until the sun shines bright

Signaling another happy night

Just Rain

Rain and fall down on your knees

The love we share is in our hands we squeeze

Just Rain

Rain and Know I am there for you

Know I am with you in all that you ever do

Just Rain

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It rained so hard and so much today that it burnt out the motor in our windshield wipers...I was thinkin about taht and Christine, like i am always thinkin of her, and I jsut wanted her to know taht she can rain her emotions onto and into me all she ever wants, my motor will never stop. (Corny maybe, but very true!)

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©30 July 2004 - 6:51am — joelcarter_86
17 January 2006 - 6:35am — poetvg
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wonderfull
work
on this poem

5 August 2004 - 6:19am — Christine Smith (not verified)
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Rain...i totally dig it. i've always used spill and vent and bleed and so many others...but rain..it almost makes it seem peacefull...or maybe i have a bad outlook on sharing feelings...whateva...lol