tiny poem

I see you

on the beach,

with

a stick of driftwood


Carving a question

in the sand

 

As big black thunder clouds

spill

over the sea

 

And approach you, with an answer

 


~/~

 

 

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Pungus's picture

Your poetry is mighty fine . . .

The storm erases the question, it seems.

If there is no answer, there is no question.


bananas are the perfect food

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S74rw4rd's picture

This one is eerie, but

This one is eerie, but beautiful also.  I have to take a break now.  I am not used to reading poems this intense one right after the other.


Starward

Spinoza's picture

I'm only glad you're enjoying

I'm only glad you're enjoying them, my friend.

saiom's picture

perfect poems like this are

perfect poems like this are brief containing the all... like a nutshell containing a thousand forests



 

 

allets's picture

Precision Imagination

Well conceived  and well executed imagery- to become beautifully received ~Lady A~