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"Fade Away"
You say its all in my head
I say your wrong.
You say i need to grow up
I say you need to shut up.
Everything you say to me
Everything you've done to me.
Fucks me up inside
And im about to fucking snap.
You say im doing this for attention
I say your fucking crazy.
You say i need help
I say you need to leave me alone.
Just shut up
Shut the fuck up.
Im tired of your shit
All i want is to fade away.
But you wont let me
You just have to keep
Fucking with me.
Im standing on the edge
So ready to jump.
I have the razor
Resting on my wrist.
Im so close but,
You keep fucking with me
Im about to fucking break.
I cant take all this shit
I need my fucking space.
Quit trying to box me in
Your shit aint going to work.
You need to back off
And let me live my life.
Remember you fucking did this to me.
You forced me to the edge
Cause you knew id jump.
You handed me the razor
Knowing i dont fucking care.
Ive wanted to leave for so long
And you knew that,
And still you keep pushing.
Shut up
Just shut the fuck up.
I just wish you'd fade away.
Fade the fuck away.
Wow Jade--sounds like someone really got under your skin when you wrote this one--I agree with one of the other comments: Personally, I don't care for the cursing, but it is a good(emotional) poem. Raw and intense--real. That's the thing to do--use the negative energy you receive in life and turn it(convert it) into positive, creative energy. Keep up the good work--I look forward to seeing more you create them!
"Set to sacrifice mind, body, and soul/to attain said goal/i.e. save souls/deconstruct Hell--Holy knees, elbows/until Satan's franchise is officially closed!"
i don't care for the cussing, not the most eloquent form of speach, but otherwise the poem is good. very expressive, good form, and you don't stray from your point.
MR
hi i really like this poem and can relate to it just a little bit! just remember if people don't like you for you then just forget them they're not worth it!!