"Broken"

The pain I feel

For all those alone

Is too great to explain

To put down in words

Is a job I hate

But I try my best, to look inside

To look inside me and all those alone,

To be alone is not to be lonely

Words spoken for hope but used to deminish the spirit

To break a person, their heart, their mind....

....their SPIRIT,

We need to live together, not alone

To be alone is to be lonely,

The truth hidden behind these little riddles,

The truth you must look hard for just to find,

The truth that you dont see at first,

But later learn was there all along,

Alone, Broken, Deminished,

This is the way we will all end up some day,

Alone, to be without eachother, close enough to see

But too far away to touch, close enough to talk too,

But too far away to hear,

Broken, no choices, no freedom, just...nothing

Just broken, shattered pieces of the mind, heart and spirit,

Deminished, to be lost, too far from the ones you loved, too far to speak

Standing alone, looking in every direction, but be blind to everything around you

To stand alone is our destiny, so get use to being alone

Spending a lifetime together with someone you love,

Isnt going to help you spend an eternity alone,

To sit and wait for a day that will never come,

To sit without the freedom you have now,

Cherish what you've got, because one day it will be gone,

For it is our destiny, to lose all that we have,

For life is only about breaking someone,

About breaking their Spirit,

And the easiest way to break a person,

Is to make them spend eternity alone,

To take away the sprirt they thought they had,

To take away the spirit that love, freedom, and life gave them,

For when we die, no one knows where we go,

But one idea is....

To place where we spend eternity alone,

Until finally, the fire in our eyes dies out,

And our Spirit has been broken...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

To be broken, everyone has been there at one time or another.. To be broken... To feel the sadness that being alone brings...to be broken...

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Laura Mcconachie's picture

Very well done. you know exactly what you're talking about. i def enjoyed that.

Adam Herdman's picture

Cool. Was an interesting read and I loved every moment of it. Great wording and feel! Nicely done! PD17 Out...