"Blu"

The world is full

Of so much chaos

This soul of pain

And heart of loss



I try to use this

To my advantage

But all I cause is

Such painfull damage



I wish that I could

Take back all I've said

But your pain won't end

Until I am dead



Just say the word

And I'll be through

I'll do anything

To repay you



It is tru that

You're alwayz there

Going back on all

The moments we've shared



I wonder why

I did this to you

How could I make

You feel so blu?

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John Ratliff's picture

You Write beautifully. From what I have seen, your talent with words is exquisite, especially in this piece. You have taken a harsh life experience and told it in lambent words. I understand that sometimes when you feel like everything that you've tried to do for the best seems to,in the end, be wrong. I could go into a long love story but...Ya know. Thank you for your comments.

-John