In neverland

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Poems for 2012

Somewhere in never land there is hidden the dream we all have.
The dream of something bigger better than what we have now.
The hope of rising above all that keeps us down.
What might be the last chance for something much better.
The thing that keeps us up for the day tomorrow.
The love of an equal and kindness of the heart.

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Seraphim's picture

Fly away to Neverland Faith

Fly away to Neverland
Faith surviving, but only a strand
Set my soul on fire again
Renew the wonder I had, and then
I'll be ready to live once more
Living life with a hand on Neverland's door.

You have a great poem here, and the makings of a true poet. Follow your heart when you write, and you'll never lack for inspiration. Truly inspiring.

Your Friend,
~Seraphim~


Post Tenebras Spero Lucem

Iceyflame's picture

Thnx

Its people like you that makes me want to do this more. My friends never saw this as a fun hobby, but i will write til i drop. Got like 3 more on my notepad. Posting them one by one soon.

And again thnx

allets's picture

Neverland's Cures

Take me with you
here is drab and cold
warmth is the quest
the destination, love.

Bring back flowers
to grow in the soul
because Neverland is
the only reality
worthy of
our dreaming.

Return to Neverland
again and once more
to fill the head, the
heart's resort,
with joy and a better
way to laugh
like love.

Lady A