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The forest was dark in the light of day
Without you in my life, I thought for sure I would perish.
Those shadows almost ate me.
But I always kept the faith that everything would be okay.
Still, I do as I choose to walk slowly into the meadows where I can be seen.
It's a dangerous world but I feel safe.
Ish.
That's why the faith.
That's why I continue forward toward that light.
I didn't much like the shadow side.
Though I think I am strong enough to handle it now.
Or perhaps I'm just turning my back to it as the sun shifts it's rays.
the title
Is powerful and evocative, and it adds an entirely different element to the poem. I can't imagine what you might try to replace it with. I would keep it if I were you.
I only changed a title on one of my poems, only once, and that one really did have a bad title. Though the new title was only marginally better.....
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Thank you! I will keep it. Pretty much describes the truth anyway.
I made the dumbass mistake of trying to edit my poems and butchered them. Seemed to be better left alone. Oh well. Appreciate your comment. Nice to see you here.
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This Is A Great Poem
I like it. Subtle and real. - Lady A -
Thanks, Lady A! Have a happy
Thanks, Lady A! Have a happy Valentine's day!!
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