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Emotional Issues Everything is leaving but where is it going
my eyes are breaking, my soul is broken
This was the beginning but now it's gone
my life is fucking, my body is fucked
All I am is nothing, where do I start
my mind is forgetting, my love is forgotten
I love the poem. Good word flow. Deep meaning. It's great.
I think this one is my favorite of yours..so far
nice word usage here. i like the whole... "eyes are breaking" thing. eyes are fragile and easily broken open into tears. great shit, i like it