My Black Guitar

Got a parcel from a good friend
Covered with papers: I just rend
Now It's in front of me: what do I see?
A black beauty. A guitar for me!


Branded case, black head.
Brown fret, two picks, A belt
They probably call it an acoustic
Gotta find a safe place for it


Gotta find a safe place for it
To hide it from Neighbourhood kids
They'll harm it I know those freaks
Or will suck my mind and ask for treat


Oh wait! How will I learn this thing? !
Need a teacher for it to strum the strings
But fuck it let's use internet videos
Let the strings ding the way it goes


chords , tuning, so complicated !
Need a simple way, don't make me frustrated
Damn! these strings hurts like razors
It's a love-hate situation for a fresher


But now I found Marty Schwartz
He can easily teach you every chords
Removed difficulties that made fends
Taught me how to play
''Wake me up when September ends''


I love to play it Because you do too
Pretending to jam just like you do
May be one day I'll become a star?
Oh! I love it! My Black Guitar

Author's Notes/Comments: 

99% of what I wrote up there is a true story :P

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Swati_Garg's picture

Got a guitar and felt the

Got a guitar and felt the same....just the same....good job :)


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haha! thank you and *same

haha! thank you and *same pinch* :p

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I really liked this one! Ha

I really liked this one! Ha ha that's so good!

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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Thanks alot smoothie :p

Thanks alot smoothie :p

Neha's picture

a lighthearted read... i

a lighthearted read... i loved it :)


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Thanks alott :)

Thanks alott :)

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You have the talent to be a very good poet. Keep it up.

Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.

Pen name:Emmenay.

Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7

Initials: M.N. Ahmed.

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Thanks alot sir !! :) It

Thanks alot sir !! :) It feels great to receive such compliment from person like you :)

allets's picture

Life Stories

I love autobiographical writes - to learn more about the writer and wish him good luck with the strings - Lady A



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Thanks you Lady A ;)

Thanks you Lady A ;)

allets's picture

Record It

Protect it (copyright) and send it out. It's a nice ballad to a black guitar (2nd reading). Just as nice ~ Lady A ~



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how can i do that? i dont

how can i do that? i dont know anything about it