To become myself ....

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To become myself ....

I am here in extsitance ,
I need to take my wrongs
in acceptance .

And make them right ,
Give my all with every last
breath I need to fight .

Fight off these demons
that come and play
get rid of them and
what they say .

They haunt my past
and threaten my future
I need to mend my life
together with God as my suture .

Take back what is rightfully mine
something I left back in time
And stop with the all this
haveing cheese with my whine .

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Trying to give myself some moral support ...

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last updated 13 April 2012 - 1:17pm
©31 March 2012 - 10:20pm — facethetruth2b

25 July 2012 - 11:47pm — running_with_rabbits

to me it feels like this poem

to me it feels like this poem was forced to rhyme rather than just rhyming which for me takes away the impact of the emotion. rereading it out loud might help with finding where the flow breaks and the rhymes seem forced.

and all the best in luck in becoming yourself it is a hard thing to do! and it takes very brave people to want to explore who they are and get deep down inside themself and find themselves! you rock for doing this.

Much Love

Ashley

2 April 2012 - 12:32pm — thisisme789