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Dad
They may be able to lay to rest the man I love,
But the dirt can’t cover these precious memories.
And I may question the one God above,
But I know His blessings are disguised as mysteries.
Although I’ll always recall that cold day in December,
It’s the warmth your life brought me I promise I’ll never forget to remember.
And though this goodbye may not come easily,
I’ll see you again, Dad. Rest peacefully.
I love you.
Will someone please pass me a
Will someone please pass me a Kleenex......this is lovely.
awesome
sorry for your fathers death but i understand what your saying love and memories dont just disappear
Krystals veiw
beautiful beautiful
beautiful beautiful beautiful... and extremely moving.. perhaps he is now a guardian angel for you...
His Spirit is one with God, no matter where his body lies
I LOVE THIS POEM,YOU CAN FEEL
I LOVE THIS POEM,YOU CAN FEEL ALOT OF SADNESS, BUT YET IT STILL MAKES ME SMILE FOR SOME REASON..... IF THAT MAKES SENCE
I love it. Its kinda simple
I love it. Its kinda simple yet beautiful. I bet a lot of people can relate to this.
So beautiful I could only
So beautiful I could only dream of being remembered this way. What a pair of lovely souls.
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
This is great.. Very strong
This is great.. Very strong
Wow! That's super good! It
Wow! That's super good! It reminds me of my baby sister's death! Good job!
<3
nice job
really good man. im new here and not really a big poetry guy but two thumbs up from me man. stay strong
shows honesty and a good
shows honesty and a good "rhythm of words" (does that make sense?)
Last two lines are good... to me, "I'll see you again, Dad. Rest peacefully" feels like the ending. What you say afterwords feels like a "p.s." which makes it more significant, convincing, and memorable. Good job on that.
How are you and your family faring?
Cheers,
Adam_San