With weiry eyes I escape my dreams

Still so surreal every moment seems

As the grass prickels beneath my feet

And how, to the gentlest beauty my eyes meet


You're so beautiful, precious like the first drop of rain

Yet somehoe, beneath those covers I see your pain

With a few steps, I lean down to caress you with care

I hope a little love you can bare


Every petal so perfect, soft and delicate

On you forever, my eyes could be set

But as dewdrops touch my fingertips

I see you cry too, how my heart it rips


I see how you forage for...something

But all you have is dearth of everything

Isolated in millions you dither to tell

Why dewdrops crown you, and how you fell


Little frisson ofbfear seeps through me

As I long await for an answer I cannot see

Maybe it's time that I rouse

Maybe one day I could fix your broken vows


One last touch and thats my goodbye for tonight

As I drift my eyes away from your pearly-whites

I feel my palm wet from drops, and realize

Those don't belong to you, but to my eyes.





Author's Notes/Comments: 

Some times when you are waist-deep in thoughts, you don't know how to get out...

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susiemayee's picture

this is amazing !

this is amazing !

Just Smile :D

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SSmoothie's picture

beautiful imagery! love the

beautiful imagery! love the thoughts penned here. thanks for sharing.

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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thankyou :) it's my first on

thankyou :) it's my first on postpoems..

allets's picture

7 Posts?

I enjoyed the first post, hope to enjoy hundreds more :D
You have a talent for describing human moments.



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That's such a lovely thing to

That's such a lovely thing to say, thankyou so much!