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You will look at me

and think I am lonely.

Isolated.

Surrounded by sea.



You will pity me

when no feet tread here.

Solitary.

Companionless tree.



You will stare at me

and you will all agree

Wilderness.

Can you hear my plea?



You will never see

that I am fearless.

Natural.

And that I am free.

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©9 July 2002 - 3:02am — enolalily
20 March 2005 - 10:39am — Tha Poetic Son (not verified)
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Great Write!

The closing stanza said all that needed to be said.

Peace and Blessings
POE

11 March 2005 - 6:43pm — Shaketa Copelin (not verified)
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I can feel you on this. You are totally fine with being alone and at peace with yourself. Some people just don't understand that.

22 December 2003 - 6:27pm — Megan Monkey (not verified)
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Great poem!!!