It’s the first time I have felt this way,
A deep loneliness I can’t push away;
On a cold and quiet Saturday morning,
I walk alone, my thoughts still forming.
I try to place a smile on my face,
But sadness lingers, leaving its trace;
I don’t want to pretend or hide,
It won’t bring peace to what’s inside.
Beneath the sun, I stand like stone,
Motionless, distant, and all alone;
I feel a weight that seems to dwell,
A silent ache I know too well.
And I just wish I didn’t feel
This heavy truth I can’t conceal;
But maybe tomorrow is a new day,
I hope it turns out a different way.
I have to say that out of all your poems I've read this on hits the spot. I know the feeling of loneliness...its sucks.. but this poem truly gets to the point of it..and the fact that you state that tomorrow brings a new day .. with hope that it will be better... i don't know there is just something with this poems.. amazingly done