would be all too quick to point out in any other person's poem (other than his own) as no WEATHER lol is mentioned here. Very cute though Doc............ glad our silly banter amused and inspired you. The Grumpy Bear<----(EMMENAY) needs a good laugh............
here, try this on for size.........
even the GBE (GRUMPY BEAR EMMENAY)
couldn't find much fault with this little ditty.....
that is unless he wants to get beat up by me...........
MY OWN LITTLE WEATHER HAIKU
sun burst at seven
rain shower then cries mightily
the earth smiles with life ..............
Ta Dah ..........see Haiku -smy coo even a rusty novice
like me can churn one out......... Impressive ( laughs .......hardly!)
I still think it's too short and for it to be true haiku as you very well know it should be about the seasons or nature............not afternoon and clouds lol. So you Sir Poet are admitting here to abusing the haiku it sounds like to me. Shame on you a big bad poet like you picking on that tiny little old haiku and bullying it with your explanation like you did! I'm sure your professors of Literature taught you better than that winks............. Aren't I annoying? Part of my charm eh Mr. Matsuo Basho........... winks even bigger......
Even I am talking about the weather as it is the sun and the clouds that make the weather changes the whole year through...come on lady poetess...come on now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Got it
Here it is for both of you, who says I do not move in company of great poets and poetesses
"Laughs, frowns and little winks
Teasing, picking on a tiny poem
Romance between the lines blinks"
Very nice but not true Haiku as Sir Poet
would be all too quick to point out in any other person's poem (other than his own) as no WEATHER lol is mentioned here. Very cute though Doc............ glad our silly banter amused and inspired you. The Grumpy Bear<----(EMMENAY) needs a good laugh............
here, try this on for size.........
even the GBE (GRUMPY BEAR EMMENAY)
couldn't find much fault with this little ditty.....
that is unless he wants to get beat up by me...........
MY OWN LITTLE WEATHER HAIKU
sun burst at seven
rain shower then cries mightily
the earth smiles with life ..............
Ta Dah ..........see Haiku -smy coo even a rusty novice
like me can churn one out......... Impressive ( laughs .......hardly!)
Love it
I love the way, you both are out to prove a point. I read between the lines and wish I could write a three liner. Inspiring chat, material for a poem
Frowns........... way too short!
write more................ winks. Sincerely, you know who!!!!!!!!!!!!! so deal with it. grins.................
This is Haiku
This is haiku poetry and haiku condenses the sea into a pitcher...if you can grasp what I mean...
Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.
Pen name:Emmenay.
Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7
Initials: M.N. Ahmed.
Laughs........ I can but...............
I still think it's too short and for it to be true haiku as you very well know it should be about the seasons or nature............not afternoon and clouds lol. So you Sir Poet are admitting here to abusing the haiku it sounds like to me. Shame on you a big bad poet like you picking on that tiny little old haiku and bullying it with your explanation like you did! I'm sure your professors of Literature taught you better than that winks............. Aren't I annoying? Part of my charm eh Mr. Matsuo Basho........... winks even bigger......
I AM NOT OFF THE POINT
Even I am talking about the weather as it is the sun and the clouds that make the weather changes the whole year through...come on lady poetess...come on now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.
Pen name:Emmenay.
Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7
Initials: M.N. Ahmed.