Grandpa

This is a story bout a grandpa and grandson

I walked proudly with him when I was young.

I'd try to act older than a little kid

walkin and talkin just like he did.



Well I never asked for anything more than his love

and he'd put his arm around me and call me Bub.

Under blue skies where white clouds sailed

he'd spin silk and magic into his tales.



We had fishin poles, secret holes, and worms in pails

we'd scout old wood roads huntin whitetail.

I heard campfire stories and I learned the truth

about the great war that took Grandpa's youth.



He'd say...rememeber son....

There's always someone out there givin out advice

take care how you listen they might not have it right.

And all the mighty leaders tellin people what to do

are visions from the past where hell was set to rule.

So pray for the time man won't kill his fellow man

keep the faith for peace and stay close to the land.



And I'd sit there beaming by the campfire flame

while an old hoot owl was calling out his name.

And I'd think to myself we'll be doin this forever

cause Grandpa fought to make the world better.



We strolled through Autumn leaves and Summer grass

and we talked of older times fillin out his past.

We'd hike in the rain and watch shiny Otters playin

with every day the same like forever was there waiting.



When the golden years ended the golden bowl collapsed

I was never really ready and the hurt knocked me flat.

And in the grief and pain I thought that I'd die

but the memory of his tender words kept my soul alive.



There's always someone out there givin out advice

take care how you listen they might not have it right.

And all the mighty leaders tellin people what to do

are visions from the past where hell was set to rule.

So pray for the time man won't kill his fellow man

keep the faith for peace and stay close to the land.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

true story....a missing father replaced by a kind and wonderful grandfather. Anniversary this month I appreciate it so much.

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Carla Mobley's picture

Okay, you did it. Made me cry. I expected it to be smaltzy, but it wasn't. It was honest and true with just the right amount of detail. Beautiful.

Richard Elliott's picture

Thank-you for posting this splendid tribute to someone who sounds a great man.

James Haggerty's picture

A sad old soldier once told me a story About a battlefield that he was on He said a man should never fight for glory He must know what is right and what is wrong (from the Flying Burrito Brothers album "Last of the Red Hot Burritos") Excellent again!

bellesims's picture

This is wonderful Eric...I could picture it so clearly... Excellent! Take care... @}->->--- Belle


Belle Sims

Nanook Of the Nashwaak's picture

You're hitting your stride now, Eric! I saw you as a child, with a loving grandfather strolling down the road. He was living the youth he lost through you, and loving you to make up for the hate he experienced in the trenches. That's what I see, anyway, and his words you relay to us are thoughtful and wise. Your images are clear and compelling. No wonder I mentioned you in my Pit of Despair as a poet of love, I see I chose well. Nanook

Edwin Robinette's picture

This true story is a wonderful story! It reminds me of my childhood days with my Grandad and Dad! Loved it much!!!