Trapped Inside (very Emotional)

Closed behind a door

Screaming renders through the wall,

Glass breaks more screaming,

he suddenly he leaves pure silence,

Sound of the truck starting,

My heart slowley starts to beat slow,

I wish i could of prevented what had started,

Instead i hide behind this door,

It's to thick to knock down,

I think it's melted shut,

I know the window. could be my only escape,

Bars on them crap sucks being a little child,

No way Out!!!!

No way to Escape!!!



Ah what's this a little glim of light,

Sneaks through the crack in the door,

I'm In Here!!!! I scream

The door opens,

A man covered in yellow overalls grabs me,

He picks me up and takes me outside to my family,

They some how escaped,

did they not know i was Trapped inside,

I could of been hurt,

Maybe i didn't survive,

Was this all my imagination,

or did i just Die?



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Author's Notes/Comments: 

to find out what the story is really about.Just remember this line "Ah what's this a little glim of light,
Sneaks through the crack in the door,
I'm In Here!!!! I scream
The door opens,  She is lifted into the heavens. One of my good poems

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Becky's picture

hey these r really good poems..they r really sad and very open. i wish i can rite like that.

Essence Scott's picture

most definitely one of your good ones.....im looking at this as being held hostage....your knight-in-shining-armor, so to speak, is the person in yellow, you might have just died, from the clue you gave me and mine own knowledge...the light...when you die and move on...its said that you see a light....the person who saved you was your guardian angel, your family being your friends in heaven......im definitely saying that you have died, but this question remains....if you didn't scream,would your angel had found you still?