Begun to lust, The ending of rust

An endless lust of volcanic explosion,

he said he loved me, i wasn't chose,

his mom hated me, i was up to no good,

i fell asleep, and i knew i shouldnt of,

 

once into my slumber, all hell broke loose,

our relationship ended, i had no proof,

who was the fake, the fraud, and the liar,

what was the chance i knew who prior,

 

The days went on, the nights got longer,

there goes my almost lover,

he started talking to another girl,

my heart exploded, flying outta this world,

 

Love became war,

my thoughts of redemption,

left me light headed,

with poems unadressed and...

 

The final stanza grew to free,

for i met a boy who helped me see,

theres more to life than watching and waiting,

but living with love, and more celebrating.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Just a new//random poem about old vs. new love. "Old love is always reflected as a battle field"

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nightlight1220's picture

Sorry I don't know why my

Sorry I don't know why my posts keep coming our double..I'm tired of deleting one all the time. I may be looking for another site soon. This one seems to have a lot of technical issues they can't handle.

 

 

... welcome to post poems.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

nightlight1220's picture

I like the way you write. You

I like the way you write. You leave a lot up to the imagination of the reader. I have very little imagination, but I think that is why I like this one and tthe other one you wrote, too. When you say"old love" in the comment, do you mean "previous"... if so I would agree, and I don't know why that is so prevalent. Its always puzzled me why people always choose to remember the bad things. 

 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Thank You

Thank you so much, writing has always been a passion of mine; and to hear(read) that others enjoy my poetry makes me so happy! I like to use a method where the story behind the poem is based off of one story line, but can also be seen as good; or bad. That choice i leave to the reader to desifer.


One is to Many; a Thousand is never Enough.

nightlight1220's picture

I like the way you write. You

I like the way you write. You leave a lot up to the imagination of the reader. I have very little imagination, but I think that is why I like this one and tthe other one you wrote, too. When you say"old love" in the comment, do you mean "previous"... if so I would agree, and I don't know why that is so prevalent. Its always puzzled me why people always choose to remember the bad things. 

 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "