What A Wangled Teb We Weave

Lovers lost in a web of lies

Making all the others cry.

Do they see me in my pain?

Do they know I'm dieing away?

Their problems come and go

And my problems never show.

Can't disturb the others when

Even though I wish I was

The one with the friend.

Lost amoung their problems

I lie

And lost amoung their problems

I die.

Don't I wish the others

Would see

What their blinded eyes do to me.

Problems that I have will always

Lie within me until I die.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Another older poem.  Sorry if it sounds depressing, but I was getting tired of always be there for everyone else and no one being there for me.  I'm fine now.

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Dana Neustel's picture

Okay, first let me say that I love love love you and will always listen, but I had to post something because I was feeling like shit tonight and I had no one to talk to so I went to your web page because I can kind of hear your voice when I read it (I'm a geek, I know). Anyway, I saw the title to this and laughed SO hard. It just struck me funny, which is EXACTLY what I need right now. This is why we work. We don't even have to talk to each other to feel better. Love you babe! (Yay!! I posted a comment! :::gasp:::).

vipervenomnu's picture

I've told you before and i'll tell you again because I know you wrote this before you knew me. I want to be there for you. I relate to this poem alot because I feel this way all the time. I'm getting better at telling people my problems but I still only tell the people that are closest to me. That means justs you, in case that was unclear. You always help me even if it seems like you don't because it helps just to have someone listen to you sometimes. I will always be there to listen to you. I can't promise that I can help with anything but I'll always listen. We have something very important in common. I think that's why we get along so well. We care about everyone. Keep adding more stuff because I love reading it.