beat me?

shes beaten me... and still i dont want to quit

just gose to show a stubbern dog can perfict old tricks

ive played this game before

slamed every thing agenst the floor

u tought me to quit, ant that some shit?

and now i deal with anothers shit ...but thats just it

that is... no shit and thats somthing i can't miss

to have no reason not to quit other than,

my will to keep playing, and i am just saying

even if the other person quits ill keep playing

just for the hope that she'll come back

and sit at this game to beat me one more time

to keep me in line and that would be just fine

       in a sence shes beatin me

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i am sencerly happy with this poem ... but even tho i wright this no one will see it so w.e.

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ValentineBuchannan's picture

its a good poem well written and all


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