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Victorian Shilhouettes
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2010 Like Victorian silhouettes
Framed inches apart,
They danced,
Hovering in each other’s breath,
Holding,
Catching in the lungs,
The air from the other,
Through the dance.
Lips, and mouths,
Inches apart,
They slow danced
In the breath of the other,
Pulsing,
Locking into
A dance, a style,
They had danced before.
Breaths
each others' breaths - I say the words out loud three times, then edit - to erase or rework it. I sometimes add or relocate a word, invert the ideas and turn the end into a modifyer- hmmmmm, Lady A
Good suggesttion
Good suggesttion