Victorian Shilhouettes

Folder: 
2010

Like Victorian silhouettes

Framed inches apart

They danced

Hovering in each other’s breath

Holding

Caught in the lungs

The air from the other

Through the dance  

 

Lips and mouths

Inches apart

They slow danced

In the breath of the other

Pulsing

Lock into

 A dance, a style

They had danced before.
 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Lips and mouths inches from each other, they slow danced in each others breath, in a dance and style well known to them.  Still working on this

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Breaths

each others' breaths - I say the words out loud three times, then edit - to erase or rework it. I sometimes add or relocate a word, invert the ideas and turn the end into a modifyer- hmmmmm, Lady A


 

 

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Good suggesttion

Good suggesttion