America

America is everything
Right and everything
Wrong all in a city
Block. Damn us.

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a.griffiths57's picture

    i think all countries

 

 

i think all countries around the world have their share of the good and the bad, the right and wrong. A very brief and straight forward poem, but I don't think you all have to be damned for having a mixture of qualities in most of your citizens.


 

 

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SSmoothie's picture

that is profoundly deep. and

that is profoundly deep. and very understandable. short simple and very effective! your writing has developed so well!!!! hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

nightlight1220's picture

Diamond...you have captured

Diamond...you have captured the core constituent of every huamn being here, not just Americans...but it is true that Americans are arriving at this enlightenment about themselves right now. The transition will take years. Many will not make it. 

 

This is what the "big ascension" everyone was talking about in 2012 is about. Only after being enlightened of our frailties and "wrongness", can we obtain the power needed to change it for the better and improve.

 

....blessings.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "