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Finally.
Folder:
About my exes. Slowly moving images,
passing through my mind.
Dreams that end to fast,
coming to me at night.
All of them having something,
actually,
SOMEONE,
in common.
I see you.
Touching me,
hugging me,
kissing me,
in every way.
Always making me feel okay.
I wish, I want,
My dreams to come true.
I want to finally be with you.
Only,
because,
I.
Love.
You.
there ya go
finally!
HAHAHA
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
I like
this and you have more skill at writing than you give yourself credit!
keep writing it will only get better.
I like
"finally"
as a title...
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Finally does seem like a good
Finally does seem like a good fit, doesn't it?
.
.
My writing. That's a good topic, don't you think? I give myself enough credit to know it is decent. Most of the time, if I don't like it, the world will never see it.
~~We can fade away together one dream at a time.~~
well,
you should be your own best critic,
check spelling, grammer ect, look for universal themes, ie. love, nature, humor, you know every day events... when writing always find that essential point of the poem. The essence is the key. I am no man of letters, but I have loved writing poetry, for many, many years. I think that anything you do in life if you love it you will do it well...You can do it too! I have faith in you...
You will be as good a poet as you want to be.
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
yes
yes indeed!
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot