Give Me Some Hope

Just a thought!

O give me some hope

With a chair and a rope

And a slip knot that carries my weight...

Where no one can stare

When i'm gasping for air

And a locked door that helps seal my fate.

Life, Life full of pain

Where living this life is insane

When I can't catch my breath

The only option is death

Please bury me out of the rain.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

"Pitiful me Poetry"..To the tune of "Home on the range"             "Inspired by others writing tragic tales"

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Where no one can stare

The flow of this poem is simply amazing! 

Let your teeth show