The Fear of No

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It seems to me the first step

to resolve your differences

to bury your past

to open your heart again

and all the other important things

revolves around true determination

more truthful than finally deciding what's for dinner

more truthful than being honest with your parents for the first time

...more true than I am with myself a majority of the time...

a level of honesty than requires yearning

courage, hunger, devotion

a reality that shakes the foundations of our conformity

our normalcy

where 'being cool' bends to submission

and great moments result from quiet, confident supervision

like a faith

because nobody knows where we're going

but with resolve, the map will present itself

the only thing standing in your path

is the fear of no

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SSmoothie's picture

Yess! 

Yess! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

allets's picture

Fear No...

Embrace yes. Loved your "confident supervision". Taking charge of the decision matrix to build and not be mean, to elevate and not destroy or harm. A faith, indeed. - Stella


 

 

deepblue's picture

thank you, the line that

thank you, the line that follows 'confident supervision' took me the longest time to decide upon by far.  I originally had two other iterations using different similes, I think one was 'like an owl in the moonlight' ...but I felt it kinda took the writing in an unintended direction.  I'm guessing I'll tinker more another day but thank you for mentioning that part of the writing specifically, take care :)