10 Sins

10 sins sat on a vine

1 was stolen and then there were 9

 

9 sins stuffed into a crate

1 fell to earth and then there were 8

 

8 sins fled from heaven

1 got away and then there were 7

 

7 sins playing harmless tricks

1 got harmed and then there were 6

 

6 sins preparing to fly

1 lost his wings and then there were 5

 

5 sins walking along the shore

1 fell into the sea and then there were 4

 

4 sins burning down a tree

1 set ablaze and then there were 3

 

3 sins fighting over food

1 fought poorly and then there were 2

 

2 sins ruinning around the sun

1 got sucked in and then there was 1

 

1 sin left all alone

he froze over hell and then there were none

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this poem when i remembered a phrase "when hell freezes over" so i thought of how it could, and this is what i got.

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joshie's picture

this is a really cool poem. i

this is a really cool poem. i enjoyed reading it :)

bishu's picture

Nice !! Welcome to PostPoems.God bless.Happy journey.

Nice !! Welcome to PostPoems.God bless.Happy journey.


©bishu 

 

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Thanks :)

Thanks :)