Saw God

.............Saw God today, asked if he would stay and chat. To sit and rap, asked him about the other day and what he would say. He smiled and put his hand to my shoulder. "Today my son, your 24 hours older. The gift of life is that you live, the beauty is that you don't even need to believe." Today my God, spoke to me. In a world of darkness I can still see, where hope becomes a treasured thing in a world of curelity kindness reveals it's beauty. That life, good or bad is a dream some wished they had.......

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wanted to dedicate this short piece to all those who had lost someone long before their time. Many of us forget how lucky we really are to get to expierence this ride we know as life.

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twisted_soul's picture

this spoke to me, it said

this spoke to me, it said that there is still hope for us humans yet

MatthewWayne's picture

Thank you, and I am glad it

Thank you, and I am glad it spoke to you. Yes I agree there are moments when I think there is hope for our race, but they are sometimes few and far between. So many mistakes have been made, and only few are willing to face them and try to correct them.


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

SSmoothie's picture

Amazing!!!

A standing ovation!!!!!!!! What else is there when words meet meaning with soul, heart and art that is a thing of perfection for me exceptional as are most of your pieces!! BRAVO!!!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

MatthewWayne's picture

Thank you, I didint feel it

Thank you, I didint feel it captured my thoughts accurately as I'm still suffering from writers block :(


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

SSmoothie's picture

Wow can I have your type if writers block!?

Sometimes things are better for others when the artist suffers for their art ;) get that book going cheers SS!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

MatthewWayne's picture

hahaha and sometimes I feel

hahaha and sometimes I feel like I suffer far to much :P but thank you for the compliment! :)


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

alivebutunawake's picture

:)

this piece is beautiful , its totally opposite to what i write :) you got seriously good talent there :)))


im just a teenager but ive been writing poetry since i started primary school , so its more of a talent than a subject to me. Other than that i love art and sport! My last year in school and hoping to travel to Japan because i always dreamt to :3 ( hopef

MatthewWayne's picture

It's different from what I

It's different from what I normally write myself haha and thank you for your kind words :)


"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne