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Lost for the moment, Gala within


The clouds of ash and smoke dance, spin




Deep breath from places unknown


Rises Rising comes a groan




Tremor all around


as if the sky is crashing down all around




This Devilish place I'm trapped in


Smiles its shark-toothed grin




Across me, still warm this viscous fluid flow


Where I'm at, what's going on, still I do not know

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allets's picture

This Poem

is my reason for writing mostly in free verse and open or blank verse. Your rhyming is precise, I tend to not want to take the time to find the perfect rhyme. :D ~allets~



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Thanks I guess its just how I

Thanks I guess its just how I see it when I write