poems 1

Blue lightning Rages across the sky

You Hear Them Calling

Without food,  water

Thunder Bellows

As you wander


Still They Call

Brilliant Flash

Mighty Roar

Cling to your Spear

Blood,  Sweat in your eyes

up  Get UP  they call

Fierce Slash  

Beastly Charge

Quick Step

Powerful Thrust

Claws Wildly Tear Flesh

Now Strike Now

Decisive lunge Pierces the Veil

Here You Stand


Spirit Warrior Bear Clan

Author's Notes/Comments: 

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Dont_punch_grandpa's picture

bloody good

So epic dude, awesome poem

"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

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Thanks man glad you enjoyed

Thanks man glad you enjoyed it

allets's picture

Amazing Write

so much action, the storm is felt, the battle epic :D ~allets~



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I'm glad you enjoyed the

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I had hoped to write a story with a clear picture