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Good-Bye Love lost in a glance
held fast in a trace
what would i give for one last dance?
only everything.
taken aback
fallen off track
what was it you said that i lack?
(oh yeah)
only everything.
Actually this is great, just the way it is!!
This is very good! No, shouldn't be longer, it captures the essence of a "moment," and has a nice wistfulness to it. (I found your site when I was checking the main page listings of featured works.)