My Cuplet

Ive traveled far and near
and still my destiny i did not steer

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Like it

I really like how you started it off making the reader think that you've accomplished all your heart's desires, but then you do a 180 and said that you still aren't happy with how your life went.

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i like how i did that:)

i like how i did that:) thanks Kayla:)