Ode to the Stars

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Odes

The city lights forming light pollution

won't let me see you tonight.

The only ones I see are, in vain,

trying to shine its best,

smiling down knowing that

I'm searching for you all from my window.

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Lauren Ellis's picture

Short and very nicely done. Somehow it makes me think you were looking for more than just the stars.
Lauren x

Sharon Wunsch's picture

You'd love my former abode in Minnesota.
Stars like I'd never seen and northern lights too
sometimes in reds or greens. I hope those pristine places
don't all disappear in the next hundred years.
I loved your environmentally friendly poems.

Ruth Lovejoy's picture

In my area things are clean and clear but go to Boston it's the opposite..