Believe (Traditional Haiku)

The wind is calling

I fear you cannot hear it

The message I sent you

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Traditional haiku.

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Daniel Kolevatov's picture

very nice haikus you have. one thing though (if i may): traditional haikus are'nt usually titled. thanx for the comment.

Dan
Art is Pain.

Ruth Lovejoy's picture

unique haiku ,sometimes we don't hear the wind messages not so much not for listening for them but being disracted by other things at the time.