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The Dead, As Yet to Die
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for all days that pass
all the hours that seem to forever last
just to waste away
if i could
i would carry your curse
my time left doesn't hold your worth
i'd trade my life to spare yours
if i could
This could be a song. Just
This could be a song. Just needs a little work
I have been reading a lot of
I have been reading a lot of your work and this is probably my favorite so far. It is simple and beautiful...sometimes I feel like we go so wrapped up in writing dedcriptive imagery and beautiful words that we lose our reader. Sometimes I enjoy not having to decipher poems and their million meanings and just reading a simple piece where the author just says what he means and means what he says. Feel free to go dissect my shit and give me feedback. Thanks
Very touching. I especcially
Very touching. I especcially like the parts that repeat. They really struck a chord within me. Great job!