i don't believe me

i don't believe me when you try these games

i want to hate you but i can't

because if i were you

i won't believe me neither

you too have a way with words

in which is as deadly as a loaded gun

however, in the right hands

can do good

however, in the wrong hands

can be a first degree murder

if you keep playing your guitar

you might be alone

keep throwing rocks at my window

keep feeding me your good looks

but no matter what,

i don't believe me.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

so ed quit his job last nite and i was there and he almost walked out on me, but this morning i feel the same way, maybe this feeling will pass, but i give him props, but not....money?

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let me say again and again the same words from the core of my heart that..love the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them too..you are good poetess indeed and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq