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Entangled
Incidents float away with the flow of the stream
Leaving their shadows behind forlorn on the banks
Life is nothing save your story and mine
Let us all enjoy the flow while we still ahve time
The banks of the river will one day crumble
So,what's the point in arrogancy? Let's be humble
Thoughts bubble and resonate deep in my mind
Let's venture out to the open sea and try to unwind
©bishu
Author's Notes/Comments:
Lovely poem! Hugss
Lovely poem! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
So kind of you Respected SS
So kind of you Respected SS
©bishu
My thoughts have always been
My thoughts have always been clearer near the sound of water and your imagery brings those sounds to mind. I love the last two lines almost as if it was written for me. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed it.
Long days and pleasant nights
Diamond
So kind of you Respected Mr Diamond
So kind of you Respected Mr Diamond to read my humble words sparing your valuable time.My heart feels happy.
©bishu
I have read your last few
I have read your last few poems my friend and was quite pleased.
I enjoy your style and imagery and always are a pleasure to read.
Thanks for sharing.
Thank you very much Respected Wordman Sir
Thank you Respected Mr Wordman Sir for the rhymy comment.Your words are much better since (probably) English is your mother tongue.How I felt at your comment is in the picture.Thanx again.
©bishu