Spaces

The space underneath the cot.. very dark

An old black trunk crammed with diaries

The space inside the black trunk

Smelling of moth balls , diaries decades old

Some spaces in the diaries left blank

Unwritten pages of dates of the past

These pages cannot be filled up now

Ink filled spaces pages of yellowed years

He reads them- oft ecstatic,oft sheds tears


The oblong space on the pink bedroom wall

Filled with a mountain scenery painting

Blue sky,pretty white clouds ,red-topped cottages

Snow-clad mountains, lofty pine trees

Could almost feel the cool of the mountain breeze

The mountain breeze of the unvisited land

He shall not live to visit but the space makes him glad

On another wall the Mona Lisa replica framed

Her smile amazingly mysterious even today


The space on the ceiling occupied by a ceiling fan

Still in winter , whirring all summer

Thoughts drift past with the artificial gust

The wooden almirah containing inherited books

Cannot empty the space ... sentiments prevent

Books mostly on religion,faith,human acievement

The termite-eaten pages uncared for yet valuable

Contents and remains of the epics on  brittle spaces

Most books bought even before his birth

Should these spaces be emptied to prove his worth ?


©bishu




Author's Notes/Comments: 

The unwritten words in the spaces........

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SSmoothie's picture

Wow! This is truly a work of

Wow! This is truly a work of art bishu! So poignant and earthy. Real and wistful questioning... Excellent your best yet! Hugss 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

bishu's picture

Thank you Respected SS for your kind read & comment

Thank you Respected SS for your kind read & comment


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