Falling Through A Hole in the Sky

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The sky, 

a beautiful blue,

so blue we can taste it,

and the grass,

a vibrant green,

spreading the scent 

of life and love;

and all the while,

slowly,

the world revolves,

around us, 

in shades of gray;

waiting,

to consume us,

in a palette 

of brown and red.

But what does that matter?

With your lid,

and my liter;

by dawn

we should

have this

figured out.

 
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a.griffiths57's picture

    I think it would be a

 

 

I think it would be a good idea to make some anti-matter death dematerization rays of our own and use it to aim at and rub out the hole in the sky.

A little of what it is made of should enable us to eraser it and serve it's right!! Nice poem makes a person think good write and interesting read.


 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

running_with_rabbits's picture

:)

YES! just yes! by morning we always have it all figured out ;) love it...makes me wanna write...good thing I am writing more these days

 

 


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

:-D

We always seemed to be falling through that hole in the sky ;-) I love bumping into people or places & suddenly being back in a forgotten realm ;-) 

(this and Lakehouse should be connected, but I couldn't find a way to weave them together. Thoughts?)

i can't wait to read Dear! Write!!!

 

running_with_rabbits's picture

hmmm

PM them both to me together, like one after the other and I will see what I can do, in my spare time after studying and maintaining my currently unmaintianed house :/


Much Love

Ashley

allets's picture

Nice

Can now check out some of yr older works. This one was very mellow - clean up the place? O.K.!

:D - Stella Best wishes for health and happiness to you and yours this new year and for all of them to follow.


 

 

running_with_rabbits's picture

<3

<3


Much Love

Ashley