Escape Velocity

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30 years in a Hole

I hold so many things

within my memory,

my soul, my self

and steadily,

the weight

slows the revolving

of my life,

but as the gravity gathers

and my grip lessens,

like a skater

pulling in my arms,

the rotation increases,

the world blurs

from the spin,

and I am flung into that

Fortress of Solitude.

 

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SSmoothie's picture

I think this poem is perfect

I think this poem is perfect and I love it. Bu t you already knew that ;) hugss beautifully rendered and very deserving of a Standing BRAVO! With whistle and cheer! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Beavis's picture

;-D

A special poem to me, so Supermassive HUGSS!!!

running_with_rabbits's picture

:)

I think this poem is perfectly titled

Wish my escape vilocity was in better shape these days


Much Love

Ashley

Beavis's picture

;-)

Me too;-) it could probably be improved on, but I think I frames the need to remain with the situation until the need to separate simply becomes greater than any desire can overcome ;-) 

 

I wish that too Dear. Love ya ;-)

running_with_rabbits's picture

;)

I'm learnign though :)


Much Love

Ashley

allets's picture

About The Title

I AGREE with Rabbit Who Lets Us Run With All - I love iceskating in the Olympics - they get extra points for not "traveling" - the circle made by blade on ice must be small and perfect and fast and unroaming - nice image. ~a~


 

 

Beavis's picture

;-)

Lady A!!! This is so perfect with the poem! "the circle made by blade on ice must be small and perfect and fast". I tip my hat to the talented & classy Lady A!!!